hello friends,
it’s the fourth prompt of #NovemberNotes challenge and i am here with my fourth prompt
i am late due to reasons “unexplained” (too many)
i.e. a poem prompt inspired by the song title “Between the Lines by Sara Bareilles”.
happy to join the challenge (Rosema & Sarah) – thank you !
i wrote this poem to remind me of the song “Between the Lines by Sara Bareilles“.
thank you for your time and i hope you enjoy my poem.
love you all. enjoy and celebrate.
keep the fun alive.
♥ between the lines ♥
love is a strange riddle
a mystery of emotions in fiddle
truths are hidden in the twiddle
love is to read each other in the middle.
love has blindfolded me in devotion
buried the feelings in grave of emotions
words creeps my mind like dusts in air motions
read me between the lines to feel the potions.
you are an impossible hold
but i want to dig your gold
just don’t hide your feelings behind
and lip your emotions inside confined.
i can read you between the lines
slam the words out of you to shine
i am infected by you and your divine
can we please talk and solve this crime?
♥
thank you so much for stopping by. it means a lot to me. i will see you soon.
with love – prabhatks ♥
The last stanza took my breat away..i love it
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Thank you so much !! Hold on your breath !! 🙋🙆 Come again … I am going to be a criminal soon !! 😊😊😊 Thank you for loving it !! 🙋
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I love this. The end line rhymes for each stanza were very effective. A great emphesis, meeting each other in the middle –compromise. I also lie that he says he can “read between the lines.” He knows her well.
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I love your inputs …. Thank you so much Mandi…. Really appreciate it so much… Thank you for loving the poem and the rhymes …. And yes the poem is of real life experience !! 🙋🙋😉💕💕💥💥
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Very thoughtful ad beautiful ❤
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thank you so much Kavita !! i am so glad and happy you loved it …. keep enjoying and smiling … wishing you happy times ahead and keep reading between the lines… the world has a secret message for you !! 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Secret message?
I’m overwhelmed by your comment. Thank you 🙂
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yep… secret message .. that’s between the lines i believe… you just need to read it and unfold it and know it …. reveal it… you are welcome and keep smiling and happy moments ahead to you…!! 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Thanks a lot 🙂
Same wishes for you
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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Wow – great rhythm in your writing
and so cleverly written.. I can read you between the lines.. that is love 😊
Love this !
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hmmmm … i am glad you can read me between the lines 🙂 🙂 🙂 so happy you loved the poem and the rhythm in it …. i am being little clever 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 ha ha ha … muchas gracious lamarr …. 🙂 🙂
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Made me smile 😀
Thank you for sharing
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👍🙋😊🙆👌
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