hello friends,
it’s the fifth prompt of #NovemberNotes challenge and i am here with my fifth prompt
i am late due to reasons “unexplained” (too many) but i will be posting slowly
i.e. a poem prompt inspired by the song title “Criminal by Fiona Apple”.
happy to join the challenge (Rosema & Sarah) – thank you !
i wrote this poem to remind me of the song “Criminal by Fiona Apple”.
thank you for your time and i hope you enjoy my poem.
love you all. enjoy and celebrate.
keep the fun alive.
♥ criminal ♥
for the one who sings
love is a sin that breaks your wings
but know nothing of its beauty rings
a song of life, love brings springs…
love is such a heavenly crime
cause i love you and your beauty sublime
if you file a charge against me to grime
know that love is worth over million centine.
and so i am into this crime…
i walk with you under the moonlight shower
stealing a moment to hold you, my sunflower
lips touch each other, a crime in overpower
i am a criminal and i love this nightly hour.
the arrow from your bow is stuck in my heart
love is truly arresting my soul from the start
i love this crime and i long to be your only part
let me be prisoned in your heart, my sweetheart.
so if love is a crime, i am a happy criminal
i will paint the art with time being emotional.
♥
thank you so much for stopping by. it means a lot to me. i will see you soon.
with love – prabhatks ♥
Love is truly arresting my soul from the start..
Those words are breath taking and beautiful
I feel your emotions throughout this poem
Great write 😊
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ola hola viola … thank you sea so much … i am as always really glad to read your inputs and thoughts…. truly inspires me more to read that you feel my emotions through the poem and i want to write more .. more and more and even more… ha ha …. love has truly arrested my soul from the day i have known the feelings crawling in my soul….. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Love is the best And worst of us – enjoy it 😀
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Yep Sea… Learning to enjoy the worst !!
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We are always learning 😊
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😊😊🙋
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A brilliant take on the prompt..
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Thank you so much !! Glad you loved it… !! 🙋🙋🙋
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