hello friends,
i feel sorry for not being able to go with the time and do the #NovemberNotes Challenge
but i promise to do it even after the time frame of challenge is over
and i will complete it maybe by december the soon possible.
going through hard time schedule and i couldn’t explain.
thank you for your time and i hope you enjoy my poem.
i had to write this poem because it was in my mind since days
and i stole some time to code it here………….
love you all. enjoy and celebrate.
keep the fun alive.
♥ read me ♥
i am not a poet, read me to relief the violent void
even strings of guitar has empty spaces enjoyed
read the silence tempting my soul, it’s hard to avoid
play the chords to beat my heart in rhythm deployed.
read my cheerless darkness awaiting your kindle
you are the one and my best ever in life to tyndall
i am stained with the pains of loneliness spindle
you are my smile, you motivate me to enkindle.
i don’t know myself, i can’t feel my real existence
i am quite numb drained of power in persistence
i am cold without desire, i can’t inspire my balance
read my sadness, i am alone to reason my diligence.
read me, my breath and my emotions bleeding
i am tired to be trapped in misery, oh it’s killing
no eating, no sleeping, always in my mind calling
i am hopeless and helpless but still love is seeding.
read me, save me, before i die with this feeling
you are my last and you will be my only needing.
♥
thank you so much for stopping by. it means a lot to me. i will see you soon.
with love – prabhatks ♥
It’s a pleasure to stop by, dear poet!
Your poetry is too much ✍️️
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its my pleasure always to read from you Anita 🙂 thank you so much and i am so so glad that you liked it !! 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 happy times ahead to you 🙂
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Hi…i am really wondering why i cant navigate thru your site..
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oh thats surprising … but whats the problem you are facing …. any specific… i wonder why… but from my end everything seems good… hope all works good in your end too… but sometimes i feel wordpress makes some fuss and hush…. ha ha ha !!
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Yeah your right… lol.. i actually lost some people for a while…now some of them are showing up again
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Hmmmm That’s great… Glad…. It happens … 🙋🙆
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http://www.anitabacha.com
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🙋🙋👍👍
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It still doesnt work…i can only get tru you if i go back to the day you follow me… other than that i cant.. you are not showing up in my reader too… i folllowed you so i should get a notifictions from you everytime you have a new post but i dont..
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Ow that’s really strange…. Even I have a friend I follow and I don’t see her feeds in my readers section…. I have to manually go in her blog to check for her updates…. There is some background issues…. I will check this error and try to find the problem…. !!!🙋
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Ooohhh that would be great…will look forward then..
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thank you …. i am just lost into some moments and stuck with personal issues… stealing the time to write but not able to hold on to it… will try to do it anyhow !! 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
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I hope you sort things out… bless you..
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Thank you so much… I do hope so !!!! Wishing you happy times ahead !! 🙋🙋🙋
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Love this melancholy poem
It’s beautiful
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I am so glad you loved it…. It’s so hard to express such things…. just being lost in the flow… !!
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😊😊😊
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